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:icontlmelord:
Not all my friends because I almost rage quit asdfghjkl;
So myself and the friends I made this year;
Michelle (~TigerClare's sister)
Alexia
Me (*MolecularExplosion hue hue hue)
Alyssa
I ACTUALLY REALLY LIKE THIS AND IT TOOK ME LIKE 2 1/4 HOURS SOBS PLS CRITIQUE
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Critique by =GonerForGood Nov 3, 2012, 3:47:38 PM
To Start Off, This Is Okay. I Think You Drew Yourself Perfectly. But The Rest Are... Okay. The Person Next To You Looks A Little Derpy. And The Thumbs Aren't Drawn Very Well. And Why Is Everybody, Like Blushing? And The Shoes Are Not That Great. Sorry If I'm Being Harsh, I Know You Aren't That Good At Humans. I Like The Detail On The 2nd Person's Shirt. The Hair Is Pretty Good On All Of Them. The Hair Is Like, Under The Eye Of The Second Person. Altogether, This Is Okay. You Should Spend A Bit More Time On Your Work. I Know You Spent 2 Hours On This But, I Bet If You Spent 4 It Would Be Better. I'm Not Saying It's Bad It's Just... Meh.
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Critique by *TentalumAnkou Nov 3, 2012, 3:27:39 PM
Okay this is going to be like, the first time I write and ACTUAL critique.

I have to say, this is truly amazing. I love how you did the lighting and i love the colours and the curvy linessss

Okay so

The positives: The fact you had height differences in the picture, I honestly don't think you could all be the exact same height and stuff blarg xD

AND I JUST LOVE THE FEET OKAY WOAH

The negatives: Okay so I don't know if this was supposed to be this way, but

There's no shading. I think it could have had a bit more impact if it had shading.

Also, I think it could have used just a bit more showing of body language.

Other than that, it's all great and wonderful ;o;

Sorry if I was too harsh. ;;;;
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~TheAceofDreams Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYZ :dummy:
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*TlMELORD Nov 3, 2012
yes
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~FarSeerAslan Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too tired to write a proper critique D: But I really like the shading on it!
The anatomy is really good too; however if you were doing proper anatomy the legs would be longer/the torsos would be shorter. They're cute that way though :D
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*TlMELORD Nov 3, 2012
Well thanks anyways ; v ;
And yes I see the anatomy mistakes too x'D I kept needing to reline it so I just kinda gave up haha
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~FarSeerAslan Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
One of my friends is an anatomy freak so I tend to notice it now Dx
You're welcome ^^;
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*TlMELORD Nov 3, 2012
Haha yeah XD
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